2022年5月21日雅思写作task1回忆:社区中心10年前和现在对比

2022年5月21日雅思写作task1回忆

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show a community centre’s changes in the last ten years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

注：图形根据考场回忆绘制，具体细节或有出入。

【图形分类】

动态地图题

【题目解析】

这个题目中有两幅图，描述了一个社区中心在过去10年内的变化情况。图中有“指南针”，故描写的时候需要使用“东南西北”，而不是“上下左右”。第一幅图需要使用一般过去时态，第二幅图需要使用现在完成时态以及一般现在时态。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 题目改写 + 概述

Para 2 = 描写第一幅图的内容

Para 3 = 描写第二幅图的内容

【参考范文】

The two floor plans clearly illustrate the development of a community centre during the last decade. Overall, only slight changes have been made to this venue although it has improved its functionality.

In the past, a hall that could accommodate 100 people was in the middle, in the north of which was a big office and in the south was a storage room. Meanwhile, a toilet and a small office were situated in the south of the warehouse. In the west of the centre, there was a garden and a parking lot but four small offices, another storage room, and a kitchen were located in the east.

At present, the large office has been bisected into a storage room and a smaller office. A new cafeteria has taken the place of the storage room in the south of the hall and the office next to the toilet has been converted into a café. The garden has gone and is replaced by a spot for indoor sports. The four offices have been combined into a large one and other areas remain unchanged.