雅思大作文范文：团队运动VS个人运动

雅思大作文范文：团队运动VS个人运动

雅思大作文题目：

Some people think that it’s beneficial for people to take part in team sports like football.Other think individual sports like swimming and running is better.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

题目大意

有人说团队运动对人有利（如足球）；也有人说个人运动如游泳或跑步更好。双边讨论并给出你的观点。

雅思高分写作

Some people claim that collective athletics such as football benefit people,while others prioritize fitness activities for individuals（e.g.swimming,running）.I would say both views are generalized conclusions based on particular experiences that fail to represent the entire picture.

The problem with those labelling team sports beneficial is the generalized definition of the so-called‘beneficial’,which is an overarching concept that has to be contextualized to make sense.For the majority without special abilities,to participate in collective athletic activities such as football does help them to cultivate qualities like team spirit and sense of collaboration,making them contributive team members.However,the same collective athletics will be repulsive to those with aptitudes for specific sports–people excellent in swimming or running might have wasted their talents if enrolled in a football or baseball team.In this respect,to render team sports advantageous seems to be too general a claim.

By the same token,the opinion to venerate individual sports over their collective counterparts is also simplistic because the benefits are not universally applicable to everyone,given the discrete condition of individuals.While athletes with innate attributes do deserve personalized athletic training to maximize their strength,the same outcome doesn’t translate to mediocre ones as well–who may feel frustrated when assigned a task beyond their ability;rather,to play a supportive role in a team makes them more confident and then facilitate a sense of achievement.

It is my conclusion therefore,it is illogical to place a higher emphasize on one athletic model as opposed to the other–which sport(whether team or individual)deserves higher priority is a complicated issue that hinges on participants’ability.

相关词汇和语法结构

Athletics体育运动

Overarching涵盖一切的

Contextualize将置于背景下考虑

Repulsive令人反感的

Enroll使加入

Aptitude天资